Thursday, December 21, 2006

The Lovers

I bet you don't remember this:
sitting cross-legged and drunk
on the roof of my car
and staring at the setting sun.

I told you you were beautiful
but you looked at me and said,
'If you think this is beauty,
you need your fucking head examined'.

Later, we made hurried love
behind the police station stables
and you whispered,
'love is one long rape'

and I took you home
and listened to your father's records.

10 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

your wierd

5:41 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i do not think you are wierd . your pome is nice!

3:16 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

your a freak why would you write about that. some people dont want to hear that crap

3:43 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really like this poem. But i wonder if that happend?

2:04 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i just wanted to sayits a good pome....

3:32 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

thats a sweet as pome, lol i like it alot, its awesum :)

1:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its a ok pome but its kindy sad in a way

10:29 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice pome nd great topic

12:14 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Love game

5:17 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

I love yr poem

5:22 PM  

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